Chào mọi người. Rất vui vì mọi người ghé thăm topic. WiR1 đoán các bạn đều có rất nhiều thắc mắc về kinh nghiệm học tiếng Anh. Bản thân WiR1 không dám nhận mình xuất sắc nhưng hy vọng không gian này có thể giúp các bạn phần nào. Hãy ghé vào góc Tiếng Anh nếu các bạn có câu hỏi hoặc muốn chia sẻ với thành viên khác về kinh nghiệm học tiếng Anh của mình.
Nội quy diễn đàn chắc các bạn cũng biết rồi ha. Vậy nên WiR1 mong các bạn chỉ post bài liên quan đến topic. Thật ra rất đơn giản, vì nếu không bị spam bởi các comment không liên quan, rõ ràng khi cần tìm kiếm thông tin cần thiết cho mình, các bạn sẽ thấy tốc đọ tìm kiếm sẽ nhanh hơn rất rất nhiều.
Nếu các bạn để ý WiR1 đã đề xuất ý kiến chia nhỏ không gian học tập ra nhiều mảng nhỏ hơn để tiện theo dõi. Nhưng BQT có vẻ cho rằng nó chưa hợp lí lắm nên giờ chỉ có thể post bài kiểu topic nhỏ lẻ thế này. Sẽ rất bất tiện nếu 1 topic kéo dài hàng trang dài dặc, tìm kiếm thông tin sẽ rất khó khăn.
Tạm thời chúng ta sẽ theo cách này. Rất mong nhận được sự ủng hộ và tham gia nhiệt tình của các bạn.
Chủ đề tuần này sẽ bắt đầu bằng bài giới thiệu nho nhỏ của mình bằng tiếng Anh ha. Nhớ là không spam nhé. Nếu các bạn có ý kiến, vui lòng ghé box " Góp ý cho diễn đàn ". WiR1 sẽ cố gắng theo dõi để giải đáp cụ thể cho các bạn ở đó. Mỗi bài gửi của các bạn sẽ chỉ là bài giới thiệu bằng tiếng Anh thôi ha. WiR1 sẽ giúp các bạn sửa một số lỗi thông thường và căn bản.
Thân!
WiR1

Hello everyone. I am glad to be here for this interview. First, let me introduce myself:
My name is Y Nhi and I'm 21 years old. I was born in Gia Lai province,Phu Thien dist.
My father did driver about 10 years, but now it does not work anymore and My mother sold groceries.
when I was a child I studied at Hoa Hong kindergarten school, Chu Van An primary school, Tran Quoc Toan secondary school and Tran Quoc Tuan high school. For now I am a student at University of Technology HCM City. My major is accounting auditing.
I like the international music(sometimes as quickly bored Vietnamese music).I like junk food, sleep late and hang out with friends ^^
Really is my English is poor, especially in the matter said. Grammar in writing is bad writing, communication shall be temporarily
I have studied a course in English language center, but it does not seem to be much improved.
I want to be a auditor in the future, or something related to economic. I hope to have good job, my dream is to become a good wife ,a good husband and a comfortable life ^^
Nice to meet everybody!!!
*** You for the comments and fix errors for me.Thank you much!!!!

I'm not good at english.I see this is good speech though it still has some mistakes. I have some ideas that is we should give some topics and everyone discuss about them. When we have comments about this topic we have to write a full sentence. I think,by this way we can just fix grammar just know more new words related to that topic.

Hry_green đã viết:

Hello everyone. I am glad to be here for this interview. First, let me introduce myself:
My name is Y Nhi and I'm 21 years old. I was born in Gia Lai province,Phu Thien dist.
My father did driver about 10 years, but now it does not work anymore and My mother sold groceries.
when I was a child I studied at Hoa Hong kindergarten school, Chu Van An primary school, Tran Quoc Toan secondary school and Tran Quoc Tuan high school. For now I am a student at University of Technology HCM City. My major is accounting auditing.
I like the international music(sometimes as quickly bored Vietnamese music).I like junk food, sleep late and hang out with friends ^^
Really is my English is poor, especially in the matter said. Grammar in writing is bad writing, communication shall be temporarily
I have studied a course in English language center, but it does not seem to be much improved.
I want to be a auditor in the future, or something related to economic. I hope to have good job, my dream is to become a good wife ,a good husband and a comfortable life ^^
Nice to meet everybody!!!
*** You for the comments and fix errors for me.Thank you much!!!!

Dear Y Nhi,
1. Hello everyone. I am glad to be here for this interview. First, let me introduce myself:
Great! I can’t find any mistake here.
My name is Y Nhi and I'm 21 years old.
Cool! It’s correct. For this sentence, you can also put it this way: My name is Y Nhi. I’m 21 (years old)
2. I was born in Gia Lai province,Phu Thien dist.
To make it more clear and concise, you can put it this way: I was born in Phu Thien district. It is a small town in Gia Lai province.
3. My father did driver about 10 years, but now it does not work anymore and My mother sold groceries.
My father used to be a driver for ten years but now he is working as…(you can add your father’s new job here) .
“ It does not work “ : cụm từ này có nghĩa “ bị hỏng”, “ không hoạt động” (máy móc chẳng hạn) hoặc “không có tác dụng (khi áp dụng một phương pháp nào đó)
4. My mother works in our own grocery store. There are many things that we sell such as….(tên loại hàng hóa mà nhà em bán chẳng hạn)
Sell groceries: nghĩa là em bán cửa hàng tạp hóa nhà em rồi.

5. when I was a child I studied at Hoa Hong kindergarten school, Chu Van An primary school, Tran Quoc Toan secondary school and Tran Quoc Tuan high school..
At ….school => In …school.
Hoặc em có thể thay đổi nhiều mẫu câu khác nhau để diễn đạt từng cấp học của mình. Bài nói của em sẽ sinh động hơn, ví dụ như:
When I was 5, I went to Hoa Hong kindergarten. It was not very far away from my home. I had a good time there because….
Later on, when I…
Cứ như thế…. Đảm bảo giám khảo ấn tượng hết chê…
6. For now I am a student at University of Technology HCM City. My major is accounting auditing
For now => Now
HCM City=> in HCM City
My major is accounting auditing.
Good! Another way to express your major is: I major in….
7. I like the international music(sometimes as quickly bored Vietnamese music).
I like music.(pop, rock, rock’n’roll,…) nếu là nhạc quốc tế, em có thể nói cụ thể hơn như : English songs, Chinese songs, Korean songs,… vì chỉ có bài hát mới là quốc tế thôi em ạ. Nhạc nói chung sẽ chia làm nhiều thể loại như trên hơn.
8. sometimes as quickly bored Vietnamese music : câu này là sao nhỉ? Do you mean you find Vietnamese songs sometimes make you feel bored? ^^
9. I like junk food, sleep late and hang out with friends ^^
Wow! Me too. But we say “ go to bed late in the evening” rather than “ sleep late”.
10. Really is my English is poor, especially in the matter said. Grammar in writing is bad writing, communication shall be temporarily
I don’t think I fully got your idea here but I’ll try. ^^ Firstly, your English is not poor, really. It’s very good.
So you can say like this, “my English is not very good” Not be too modest, because sometime other people will think you are not confident enough.^^
especially in the matter said : especially in speaking, or oral speech.
11. Grammar in writing is bad writing, communication shall be temporarily
What do you mean by this? So sorry because I really do not get your meaning. Tell me when you see this, okay?
12. I have studied a course in English language center, but it does not seem to be much improved.
Bây giờ em còn học ở trung tâm chứ? Vì cái đó sẽ ảnh hưởng đến việc dùng thì ở đây. Rất có thể là thế này:
I had an English course at… (tên trung tâm chẳng hạn) 3 months ago.
Nếu còn học : I have been studying ….at….
13. but it does not seem to be much improved. It’s okay. Try your best and you will make it one day. ^^

=> but it seems that my English has not been improved too much/ I haven’t had any considerable improvement in my oral English…
It’s okay. Try your best and you will make it one day. ^^


14. I want to be a auditor in the future, or something related to economic => economy. Yes, you can. ^^
I hope to have good job. My dream is to become a good wife ,to have a good husband and a comfortable life ^^
15. Nice to meet everybody!!!
*** You for the comments and fix errors for me => help me to correct the mistakes. Thank you so much.
It’s a very good self-introduction. And I think you can do it much better if you practice more. It’s no need to say thank you because I’m very pleased to help you.
If you want to see whether you can correct all the mistakes as I have told you above. Just follow my comments and rewrite it. You will see the difference.
Practice makes perfect. Try your best and have a nice day.
WiR1

babylion đã viết:

I'm not good at english.I see this is good speech though it still has some mistakes. I have some ideas that is we should give some topics and everyone discuss about them. When we have comments about this topic we have to write a full sentence. I think,by this way we can just fix grammar just know more new words related to that topic.

Yeah. It's the purpose to help those who want to practice and improve their English here. As you can see, this week we have a topic. Everyone can make a short self-introduction as Hry did. It is a very good beginning. We should follow it and do it little by little. Of course, if anyone has questions, just feel free to share with me.
But remember, one topic for one week. No spam. No other topics.
Hope you will show us your self-introduction soon and we can dicuss if you have questions.
Thanks. Nice day!
WiR1

Hihi ^^
6.Chị ơi trường em tên là "Đh kỹ thuật công nghệ tp hcm"chớ ko pải là "ĐH kỹ thuật công nghệ" ở tp hcm.^^
8.Yes,I mean it.
11.Hix,c.dung ơi câu này ý e là :"Ngữ pháp trong văn viết thì tệ,còn giao tiếp thì còn tạm được".Mà chẳng biết viết sao thành dz nữa >"<
**you say:"I don’t think I fully got your idea here but I’ll try. ^^ Firstly, your English is not poor, really. It’s very good."^^.Thank you for the compliments and encouragement
**My weakness is to understand what people say but can not answer fluently>
**You say no thanks,but I thank you very much

Hry_green đã viết:

Hihi ^^
6.Chị ơi trường em tên là "Đh kỹ thuật công nghệ tp hcm"chớ ko pải là "ĐH kỹ thuật công nghệ" ở tp hcm.^^
8.Yes,I mean it.
11.Hix,c.dung ơi câu này ý e là :"Ngữ pháp trong văn viết thì tệ,còn giao tiếp thì còn tạm được".Mà chẳng biết viết sao thành dz nữa >"<
**you say:"I don’t think I fully got your idea here but I’ll try. ^^ Firstly, your English is not poor, really. It’s very good."^^.Thank you for the compliments and encouragement
**My weakness is to understand what people say but can not answer fluently>
**You say no thanks,but I thank you very much

6. Really? ^^ It's obvious that I will not fully got your idea, right? Your college's name should always be well translated in English. Don't you consult it online? on your college's website, I mean. Hii..
11. If so, you can say like this, " It's really bad if I use grammar in writing, but in speaking it's okay." Is that what you meant? ^^
Uhmm... give me a thank if you really want to say thank you.
Hope you will give me a revision of your writing. ^^

Dear Lanh,
There is one word I could say about your writing: excellent! I can hardly see your grammar mistakes or misspelled words in this essay. We are of one major, you know? But I bet I did not do as well as you when I was a sophomore (I’m now a junior of English major.^^)
I can see your confidence, your dream, your hobbies, and many other things from which I think other people can learn a lot.
Firstly, thank you for joining us and hope that we can see more of your entries here. Secondly, as I have mentioned above, though there are very few mistakes in your essay, there are several things I will suggest you to think over and revise by yourself.
1. As my hometown, Phu Thien gives me many good memories, which make my soul more comfortable and peaceful whenever I am unhappy
>>> I know what you meant but we seldom say “ Phu Thien gives me…”
It is not Phu Thien that gives you such things, but the people, the things or whatever in Phu Thien do. You can think out another sentence and put it before this sentence. For example,
“As my hometown, Phu Thien is a very important part in my life. There, I have many unforgettable memories which make me feel peaceful and ….”
Do you agree with me? ^^
2. . It is because Phu Thien is the only place that brings me the feeling of coziness and warmth of people, my friends, my teachers and especially my family. Therefore, it is not easy for me to move to Ho Chi Minh City to learn for the first time.)
>>>> thường thì nếu dùng ‘because’ thì sau đó không cần thêm từ chỉ kết quả nữa. hoặc là không dùng because, hoặc là không ‘ therefore’.

Phu Thien is the only place that brings me the feeling of coziness and warmth of people, of my friends, of my teachers and especially of my family. Therefore, it is not easy for me to move to Ho Chi Minh City to study for the first time.

Hơn nữa, có 2 động từ ‘to be’ là “is” cùng 1 lúc, như vậy câu nên có một mệnh đề chính và một mệnh đề phụ. Nên câu của bạn mới chỉ là một nửa, bạn thử so sánh nhé:

It is because…my family that I find it not so easy to move….to study for the first time.
3. I like speaking English and singing English songs though my voice and my pronunciation are not good.
>>> That is not a shame. Do what you like and you will find your life is more valuable. ^^ I’m expecting to listen to your songs. Will I have that honor? ^^
4. In addition, having enough money to travel around Vietnam with my friends is my biggest desire.
>>>> Me too, especially if it is a trip with my beloved ones. ^^
5. For the future job, I always dream of being a teacher of English that motivates me to study diligently
>>>> Cool! As long as you love being an English teacher, you will stick to it with a very strong enthusiasm which is really important to your career later. ^^
6. Before being a good wife or a good mother, I want to improve my knowledge; I want to do something for my parents, my siblings and my friends.
>>>> Before being a good wife and a good mother, I want to enrich my knowledge first; I want to do something good for my parents, my siblings and my friends. [Great!!! It’s a very big and admirable plan.]
7. It is truth that the happiness and success are the most valuable things in the life but we only recognize them when we appreciate their values.
>>>> It is true/ the truth that the happiness and success are the most valuable things in our life but we can only recognize them when we appreciate their values. [That’s true. I agree with you.]
8. Therefore, I try to appreciate what I have.
>>>> Therefore, I always try to appreciate what I have. [Absolutely!]
9. My slogan is live to love and love to be loved.
>>>> My slogan is “To live is to love and to love is to be loved.” Wow!
10. Actually, I am not interested in talking about myself. Moreover, my English is not good so this is not a formal essay for the topic above. It is just something I want to share to you. And I hope you will help me improve my English. Thank you very much!
>>> No, no. Our topic is not that formal. We just want to engage people to share us some information about them in English. It is really a good chance for you to meet people and practice your English. I do not mean you have to tell us all your secrets which you do not want to let anyone know. ^^ Just feel free and tell whatever you like.
This is a very good composition. So far, we have had two people who really did very good job. I’m surprised and really happy to see that. I’m expecting all of your entries whenever we have topics to share. I’m very willing if I can help you something in learning English. If you want, you can revise this essay and improve your English by yourself.
Tell me if you have any questions or whatever, including my comments above.
Thank you very much for joining us.
Best,
WiR1

lili_tran đã viết:

Dear WiR1,
Thank for your comments which are really helpful for me. It's so wonderful that we are of one major. Actually, I do not know you well! How is your life? how is your study? would you share something about yourself? I'd love to hear about those things. We are strangers, but i always hope that we will be good sisters through the love for English! (^_^)
I am looking forward to your rely!
Best,
Lili_Tran

Hi Lanh,
I'm so happy to hear that my comments do help you very much. Yeah, I admit that it was my fault not to introduce myself though I told you to do so. Forgive me for that, will you? My name is Dung. I'm studying abroad. I've been in Shanghai for more than 3 years. It's freezing here. I am almost frozen all the time as if I was in a huge fridge, you know? Well, there are lots of things I'd like to share you. But I think we do have a lot of time to do so, if you come here so frequently. I'm very glad if you consider me as a good sister. It's really an honor, right? ^^
We're holding a contest. Can you see the topic? I will be very grateful if you can go there to have a look and join us.
Have a good day!
Tell me if you have anything to share, regardless of anything you want(your life, your study,...)
Best regards,
WiR1
p.s Oh, I forgot it. Do you have exams now?

lili_tran đã viết:

Hi WiR1,
Thank for your sharing! I always dream of going to Shanghai, u know? I do not know whether my dream come true or not! hihi!
My major is English but i also have to learn Chinese. To me, The Chinese words are so complicated that I always forget how to write but Chinese is a very interesting language. Recently, I am coping with a lot of obstacles. For more than a year learning English, I have not had a good method to study better. The most difficult thing is the change of the schedule. It lead to change my habit so i have to change the time to learn at home. I am living in dorm with 23 people. Can you imagine? It's so noisy here! Sometime, it is like the hell here! hihi! however, dorm is the best place to live due to the reasonable price. Learning needs efforts and attempt, I always try to have both of them, but i do not know where i can find out confidence that i always lack when i have to present my topic in front of the class. although i had prepared carefully at home, i feel scare and speak quickly as if i am a machine. as a result, no one can follow my presentation and i get bad mark. hix! this is the most difficult matter i have! I wish someone would tell me what i should do be more confident! what do you think I should do?
I love this English space. it seems very few people care about English, right? But it does not matter, i love it and I try to join as much as possible.
Thank for your concern, sister!
Best!
Lanh

Hi Lanh,
It’s amazing to know that you are learning Chinese, too. I thought you would learn French as the second foreign language in university. You’re right. Chinese characters are very difficult to memorize. I had so many difficulties dealing with them when I first came to China. But the problem is when I started my English major as a freshman, I hardly had time to practice writing in Chinese. So I mostly forgot all of them except for “pinyin”- the way they are pronounced, I mean. We now have computers which can help us a lot in typing, so even young Chinese cannot remember how to write some of Chinese characters. ^^
You will probably come to Shanghai some day in the future. It will be a very nice trip after graduation as a gift for you, maybe. Who knows? Right? ^^ Wish you can fulfill your dream soon.
I’m also sorry to hear that you have to cope with so many obstacles. I don’t know how to tell you because I do have difficulty in my life too. But I think as long as we keep holding on, we will never be defeated by any trivial things. May you have the best will to overcome such barriers in your life and study as well! As to study methods, I think you can try different ways until you find the most proper way. It is quite difficult for you to make most of your time in study in a room with 23 people!!! It’s a very shocking thing I have ever heard. However, I see your efforts and I don’t think other people can do the same thing as you can. So just keep trying in whatever you want to achieve. You do have family, friends and other beloved ones. Share with them whenever you have difficulty and you will find it easier to win over those obstacles.
To your confidence, I think ‘practice makes perfect’. In the beginning, you may find it not an easy thing to feel confident in front of so many people. But when it becomes part of your characteristics, I think it will never trouble you later. Practice more at home, talk more to classmates and teachers will help a lot. Just do that step by step and you will gain things little by little.
I am very happy because you love this space. Actually, I am busy with my study too. But I know there are many English lovers, like you want to have a space like this to share and to practice. So I’ve tried. This may be a little bit difficult in the beginning, but I hope it will be improved very soon. Come here if you have time and want to share something with me and others. You are very welcome.
Nice day and see you soon.
WiR1
p.s I want to say thank you for joining us in the picture contest. You are right when saying that it’s a very good chance for you to be more confident. To me, it’s not only your courage but also your deep understanding of other people's feelings. You know how we have attempted to hold this activity, and you helped us. Thank you!

oh my god!!! i'm admired really. because i don't can writing, speaking. and grammar very bad. i don't know, how i can improve it. i'm very sad. lili and wir1-dung you can help me!!!

nhungbaovu đã viết:

oh my god!!! i'm admired really. because i don't can writing, speaking. and grammar very bad. i don't know, how i can improve it. i'm very sad. lili and wir1-dung you can help me!!!

Oh my Lady Gaga, ^^
Firstly, thank you so much having seen our topic finally. ^^ Why do I say so? Because I have been waiting for you to join us in the very beginning. I know you love English too. You have composed several entries in English and I saw them. I could not even think that lili_tran would join us as she does now. So you are very welcome, see? ^^
As for your request to lili_tran, let her see this and give you a reply, okay? ^^
What I want to tell you now is that you can make a very brief introduction about yourself. We will help you as we can if there is any mistake.
I'm looking forward to seeing your self-introduction.
Best,
WiR1
p.s Oh, there are some mistakes I've found. Can you have a look? ^^
1. I'm admired really.
==> I really admire (somebody).
2. because i don't can writing,speaking. and grammar very bad.
==> because I can't write in English/speak English very well and I'm not good at English grammar either. {That's okay. Practice more and you will make progress.^^}
3. i don't know, how i can improve it
==> I don't know how I can improve them(em nói cả dây thế mà, nào là nói, viết và ngữ pháp..^^)
4. i'm very sad. lili and wir1-dung you can help me!!!
==> ^^ Not be sad. Calm down, dear. I will help you. Lanh, will you? ^^

các bạn ơi có thể giúp mình ngữ pháp tiếng anh dc không . mình chuẩn bị thi tốt nghiệp rồi lo wa". phải học như thế nào đây khi đầu óc trống rỗng. help me. huhu . die mất thui

boyteenphonui đã viết:

các bạn ơi có thể giúp mình ngữ pháp tiếng anh dc không . mình chuẩn bị thi tốt nghiệp rồi lo wa". phải học như thế nào đây khi đầu óc trống rỗng. help me. huhu . die mất thui

Bạn thân mến!
Ngữ Pháp tiếng anh là môn học cần nhiều thực hành bên cạnh việc học lí thuyết.
Vì bạn không nói cụ thể nên mình k bít bạn cần phương pháp học hay loại sách để học hay là nội dung kiến thức nên mình sẽ nói đại khái theo những gì mình nghĩ nếu có gì thắc mắc thì cứ để lại comment nha.
- về phần nội dung kiến thức: bạn cần học lại nội dung phần language focus trong sách tiếng anh 10, 11, 12. Bạn tham khảo trang này xem sao:http://tienganhhangngay.com/grammar hoặc e-book: http://www.download.com.vn/ebook/foreign+languages/8169_on-tap-ngu-phap-tieng-anh-ebook.aspx, sách này nè bạn:
- về phương pháp học: như mình đã nói cần phải thực hành, cần làm bài tập nhiều thì mới nhơ và hiểu sâu cấu trúc ngữ pháp đc. ngoài làm bt trong các sách giáo khoa, bạn nên tham khảo thêm: http://luyenthianhvan.org/2007/06/trnh-bi-1.html và sách:



có lẽ những thứ này bạn dễ dàng tìm đc trên mạng và những thứ này hơi lí thuyết và hơi máy móc 1 chút nhưng giờ mình chỉ có thể nói đại khái vậy àh! bạn cứ xem lại và có chỗ lí thuyết nào không hiểu thì pm cho mình, mình biết thì sẽ hướng dẫn cho bạn, k biết thì mình sẽ cùng bạn tìm hiểu vì mình cũng chẳng giỏi gì lắm mà! hjhj!
mình luôn sẵn sàng giúp đỡ bạn, nếu bạn có thắc mắc gì thì pm cho mình nha!
cảm ơn bạn vì đã ghé qua góc tiếng anh!
thân,
Lành

lili_tran đã viết:

boyteenphonui đã viết:

các bạn ơi có thể giúp mình ngữ pháp tiếng anh dc không . mình chuẩn bị thi tốt nghiệp rồi lo wa". phải học như thế nào đây khi đầu óc trống rỗng. help me. huhu . die mất thui

Bạn thân mến!
Ngữ Pháp tiếng anh là môn học cần nhiều thực hành bên cạnh việc học lí thuyết.
Vì bạn không nói cụ thể nên mình k bít bạn cần phương pháp học hay loại sách để học hay là nội dung kiến thức nên mình sẽ nói đại khái theo những gì mình nghĩ nếu có gì thắc mắc thì cứ để lại comment nha.
- về phần nội dung kiến thức: bạn cần học lại nội dung phần language focus trong sách tiếng anh 10, 11, 12. Bạn tham khảo trang này xem sao:http://tienganhhangngay.com/grammar hoặc e-book: http://www.download.com.vn/ebook/foreign+languages/8169_on-tap-ngu-phap-tieng-anh-ebook.aspx, sách này nè bạn:
- về phương pháp học: như mình đã nói cần phải thực hành, cần làm bài tập nhiều thì mới nhơ và hiểu sâu cấu trúc ngữ pháp đc. ngoài làm bt trong các sách giáo khoa, bạn nên tham khảo thêm: http://luyenthianhvan.org/2007/06/trnh-bi-1.html và sách:



có lẽ những thứ này bạn dễ dàng tìm đc trên mạng và những thứ này hơi lí thuyết và hơi máy móc 1 chút nhưng giờ mình chỉ có thể nói đại khái vậy àh! bạn cứ xem lại và có chỗ lí thuyết nào không hiểu thì pm cho mình, mình biết thì sẽ hướng dẫn cho bạn, k biết thì mình sẽ cùng bạn tìm hiểu vì mình cũng chẳng giỏi gì lắm mà! hjhj!
mình luôn sẵn sàng giúp đỡ bạn, nếu bạn có thắc mắc gì thì pm cho mình nha!
cảm ơn bạn vì đã ghé qua góc tiếng anh!
thân,
Lành

uh nhưng mà mình học anh văn nhưng khả năng dịch của mình còn kém quá. nhưng mà học lại không vào được vậy phải lam sao

Dear all,
May be so late for me, because I didn't see any comments after 5 months ago. Hopefully this topic is continuing and developing for me and everyone to improve English.
Sorry everyone, I forgot introduce my self to forum.
- My name is Hoang, I am 17 years old, I didn't born in Phu Thien district but I live Phu Thien district - Gia Lai province of Vietnam and all my Childhood memories on this small town.
- My father and mother are farmer, all of them live and work on the rice field, they are hard working. Special they love me so much and me too.
Luckily I have a computer, this is a present I've got from my father due to I've good point in high school so I can discovery all the word by internet on my computer.
English, English and English.... This is very difficult for me to improve, right now I haven't got time to concentrate to English because I need to concentrate to Mathematics, Physics and Chemistry for university exams next year.
Why am I needing to improve my English because I need to find a good job in the future and I can go to anywhere on the word. Hence , I try to improve some of skill: reading, speaking, writing and listening by this topic.
So please help me to correct the fault all my Crammer. Hopefully that, this forum can help me improving my English, have a lot of friendly and we can share a lot of thing together.

Thank you and best regards

Hoang

Dear Hoang,
Firstly, I’d like to give you my sincere thank for your interest in our English club’s activities. Thank you for your participation, and especially your expectation for us. I was very surprised when I read your entry. Your English is very far better than what a high-school student is expected to have. I bet you are doing much better than I did when I was at your age. Congratulation for that! ^^
As you have mentioned about your concern in learning English and hoped that we will help you to improve it, to be one of the people who are in charge of this club, I’d say that: We are always willing and happy to help you. Though we are students of different majors in different universities, we have one thing in common. That is our love for English. To us, nothing will satisfy us more than seeing more and more youngsters be interested in English. We are always trying to keep this topic going on as you recommended. We think it’ll be very possible if there are more and more people like you who are really interested in English and brave enough to join us. Do you think so? I hope so. ^^
I can see your bright future now, really. ^^ I am sure that it will be filled with success and prosperity. Trust yourself because you are really able to make it. Good luck!

This is the revised version of your entry that I have tried to help you to find and correct the mistakes. Hopefully, it helps. If you have any question or suggestion, just feel free to tell me. You are always welcome. You will be an active member in this club, I hope.

Have a good time with your summer vacation!
WiR1

Dear all,
May be so late for me, because I didn't see any comments after 5 months ago.

>>>> It may be so late for me to see this topic. The last comment was posted 5 months ago so I didn’t notice it.

Chị sửa lại như thế này. Hoàng coi lại nhé. “Ago” dùng 1 cách độc lập và không đi kèm giới từ. Em có thể tách thành nhiều câu nhỏ như thế này sẽ giúp diễn đạt ý văn một cách mạch lạc hơn.


Hopefully this topic is continuing and developing for me and everyone to improve English.

>>>> Hopefully, this topic will gain more concerns and more efforts will be made so that it can be developed and continued. For that, everyone will have chance to improve their English.

Câu của em cũng rất hay. Đây là gợi ý thêm của chị.

Sorry everyone, I forgot introduce my self to forum.

>>>>> Sorry everyone. I forgot introducing myself.

Động từ forget/remember có 2 cách dùng:
1. nếu mang nghĩa nhớ/quên 1 hành động trong quá khứ thì em dùng cấu trúc:
forget/remember + Gerund/V-ing
2. nếu mang nghĩa nhớ/quên 1 việc cần phải làm thì dùng cấu trúc:
forget/remember + to do something

- My name is Hoang, I am 17 years old, I didn't born in Phu Thien district but I live Phu Thien district - Gia Lai province of Vietnam and all my Childhood memories on this small town.

>>>> My name is Hoang. I am 17 years old. I was not born in Phu Thien district, but I spent all my childhood in this small town.

Em chú ý đến việc tách các câu thành câu độc lập với dấu chấm. 1 câu đơn giản chỉ có 1 chủ ngữ và 1 động từ (trừ các câu đặc biệt như câu mệnh đề,câu điều kiện,…). Nên chị đã tách thành nhiều câu như trên.

- My father and mother are farmer, all of them live and work on the rice field, they are hard working. Special they love me so much and me too.

>>>> My father and mother are farmers. They work very hard on field for rice. Specially, they love me very much and I love them too.

Bố và mẹ = số nhiều, nên danh từ cũng sẽ phải ở số nhiều Hoàng nhé. Ở đây cũng nên tách câu ra bằng dấu chấm câu. Nếu không sẽ mắc lỗi “run-on sentences”. ^^ Hơi phức tạp, nhưng em chú ý làm cho nó đơn giản nhất là được rồi.
Câu "They love me so much and me too." Cụm từ “ me too” không biểu đạt được ý em muốn nói là “ em cũng rất yêu họ”.
Ví dụ nhé.
They love cats, and me too. Nghĩa là họ thích mèo, em cũng thích mèo.
Câu của em, tương tự sẽ dịch là: Họ yêu em, và em cũng yêu em.

Để tránh gây ra sự khó hiểu, chị viết lại thành: They love me very much and I love them too. Như vậy là rõ ràng rồi phải không? ^^

Luckily I have a computer, this is a present I've got from my father due to I've good point in high school so I can discovery all the word by internet on my computer.

>>>> Luckily, I have a computer of my own. That was the present my father gave me because I got good scores in my study. With the computer, the world is open to me because I can discover all of things when I surf the Internet.

Ý văn rất tốt, chỉ là cách hành văn còn 1 số chỗ cần lưu ý. Em tham khảo nhé!

English, English and English.... This is very difficult for me to improve, right now I haven't got time to concentrate to English because I need to concentrate to Mathematics, Physics and Chemistry for university exams next year.

>>>> English, English and English… This subject is really a difficult one for me to learn and improve myself. I don’t have too much time to care about/concentrate on only English because I also have to spend time on Mathematics, Physics and Chemistry and prepare for the university entrance examinations.

Ở đây là 1 số lỗi về từ và cách diễn đạt. Hoàng coi bản sửa nhé!

Why am I needing to improve my English because I need to find a good job in the future and I can go to anywhere on the word. Hence , I try to improve some of skill: reading, speaking, writing and listening by this topic.

>>>> Why do I need to improve my English? It is because I want to find a good job in the future and go everywhere in the world. Thus/hence, I have tried to improve some skills like reading, speaking, writing and listening.

Hoàng chú ý cấu trúc của câu hỏi. Câu cuối, “by this topic” chị chưa hiểu ý em lắm. ^^


So please help me to correct the fault all my Crammer. Hopefully that, this forum can help me improving my English, have a lot of friendly and we can share a lot of thing together.

>>>> So please help me to correct the mistakes I have made. And hopefully, this forum will help me a lot in improving my English. Moreover, I do hope that I can make more friends and we can share a lot of things together.

Sure! Rất sẵn sàng giúp em khi em cần giúp đỡ. ^^ Và rất mong CLB sẽ là không gian cho tất cả mọi người cùng giao lưu và tiến bộ.

Thank you and best regards

WiR1 says, “You are welcome!”

Welcome to English forum
- Firstly I am thank you for your helping me, Ms. WiR1 due to correct my English Grammar and welcome me to this forum. I am very surprise to you Ms. WiR1 because I was up my comment to forum this afternoon and I have got a reply after few minutes. I am ready and ready to happy with this topic ^-^.
- Secondly I am thank you for your commending and rewarding my English. Actually my English not so good the same with your thinks due to I used a Computer for correcting all my vocabulary at Word Office and Lac Viet software.If you give me a pen and brand-new paper, I'm giving to you a lot of mistake on my topic :-D : vocabulary also grammar.
- Thirdly I would like to welcome everyone jointing with us and making a interested this forum.
Next time if possible, could you please give to me one topic after correcting my Grammar and sentence.


Thank you and best regards

Hoang

Hi, Hoang,
I’m very happy to see you again here. You know, I appreciate your honesty very much. Though you had to use Google translation to help you before you sent me your composition, I still feel impressed by your enthusiasm about English.
Did you write by yourself this time? ^^ I know you put what you thought here without the help of any devices, because I can see the mistakes you made. Not be embarrassed. Making mistakes is a way of learning. If you don’t let people know your mistakes, you will never make progress. Do you agree with me? ^^

This time I won’t correct the mistakes for you, but I will point out what they are. I want you to correct them by yourself first. Then I’ll help you step by step until your writing is better. What do you think?
You do this revising work first. Try to finish it, and then I will give you another topic to write. Be patient and do things little by little. You will surely make progress.

See this one and try to correct the mistakes pointed out.

Welcome to English forum
- Firstly I am thank you (lỗi về động từ ) for your helping (lỗi về loại từ) me, Ms. WiR1 due to (xem lại cách dùng của due to) correct my English Grammar (lỗi về cách viết hoa) and welcome me to this forum. I am very surprise(lỗi về hình thức từ) to you Ms. WiR1 because I was up (lỗi về động từ) my comment to forum this afternoon and I have got (lỗi về thì) a reply after (lỗi về giới từ) few minutes. I am ready and ready to happy(sắp xếp lại và thêm từ để diễn đạt hiệu quả hơn) with this topic ^-^.
- Secondly I am thank you (lỗi về động từ)for your commending (lỗi về loại từ) and rewarding (chọn từ phù hợp hơn) my English. Actually my English not(thiếu động từ chính trong câu) so good the same with (dùng từ nối khác nhé)your thinks (chủ ngữ? động từ?) due to (dùng từ khác nhé) I used a Computer (lỗi về cách viết hoa) for correcting all my vocabulary (dùng từ khác thử nhé)at Word Office (viết lại câu ) and Lac Viet software. If you give me a pen and brand-new paper, I'm giving to you a lot of mistake (số nhiểu/ít của danh từ) on my topic :-D : vocabulary also grammar (câu chưa mạch lạc và hoàn chỉnh).
- Thirdly I would like to welcome everyone jointing with ( lỗi về cách dùng của động từ) us and making a interested this forum (lỗi về cách diễn đạt, nên viết lại).
Next time if possible, could you please give to me one topic after correcting my Grammar (lỗi viết hoa ) and sentence (số nhiều/ít của danh từ).



Try your best! ^^
Best,
WiR1

Ms. WiR1, please checking my topic as below:

- Firstly, Thank you for your help, Ms. WiR1 because you corrected my English grammar and welcome me to this forum. I am very surprising to you Ms. WiR1 because I just up date my comment to forum this afternoon and I has got a reply a few minutes. I am very interesting and happy with this topic ^-^.
- Secondly Thank you for your commend my English. Actually my English isn't as good as you think because I used the computer to correct all my post for errors. If you give me a pen and brand-new paper, I'm giving to you a lot of mistakes on my topic :-D, usually my mistakes are vocabulary and grammar.
- Thirdly I would like to welcome everyone come to us and we will build a useful playground for everyone
Next time if possible, could you please give to me one topic after correcting my grammar and sentences.

Thank you and best regards

Hoang

Hello KSORHOANG!
I'm very happy to see you here!
I really have good impression with your introduction and your writing as well! I am glad to see that you 've realized the important role of english in your future life! once you knew that, it will be a motivation for you to learn better. Ms wir1 and I are always willing to help and share with others, especially those who love english like you.
Welcome you to our club! I hope you will have great time when joining us!
And thank for joining us!